by Poetry Authoress Victoria L. McColley
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Michelle's Challenge
A Poetic Descriptive Compilation a Few Varied Facets of Me.... |
I Am…
I am weakness overcome by strength;
I am insecurity within my confidence;
I am emotional with passionate love;
I am selfish with my generosities;
I am honest with my truths;
I am poverty overcame by womanhood;
I am a victim who became a survivor;
I am bruised within the damage of my loving heart;
I am fragile underneath my stolidity;
I am distrusting until I am shown trustworthy;
I am sorrows embraced by acceptance;
I am gentle underneath my callous exterior;
I am a lesson of life nurtured by wisdoms;
I am blessed with voices creative gifts & vision;
I am much more than I already know I am;
I am a child of God believing in The Holy Spirit;
I am imperfect with a perfect soul;
I am very spiritual;
I am Victoria L. McColley;
I am your den sister…
(Written: August 27th, 2008 3:40 a/m)
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique
Copyright© 2008 Poetess Victoria L. McColley
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| Michelle Mead (Michelle's Challenge) |
| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain | 11/17/2008 |
| Vickie,
So nice meeting you, and thanks for being open - vous sembler fascinante personne, et votre poésie - mon Dieu - c'est tous les superlatifs façon!! Étreintes, Lance | |
| Reviewed by Michelle Mead | 9/6/2008 |
| I love it, your details are great in this. I am glad Regis showed me this, I couldn't keep up with all the challenge responses, lol, so was afraid i may have missed some, this is really great!!! Blessings, Michelle | |
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray | 9/6/2008 |
| And
I am glad to know you, Vickie. I find your verses an exercise in
validation and I respectfully find it very well done. Powerfully yet
nicely expressed. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis | |
| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh | 9/6/2008 |
| Great poem, Your new poems are so full of depth and they tickle my brain, beautiful! | |
| Reviewed by Rose Rideout | 9/4/2008 |
| I somehow knew all this before I read your words, maybe because we are den sisters. Thank you Vickie for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose | |
| Reviewed by Sheila Roy | 8/30/2008 |
| I love how you use opposites for these descriptions. You are brave to share this inward glance with us. Live well!
Sheila | |
| Reviewed by S Phillips | 8/30/2008 |
| Victoria,
what a powerful write. I love that you see the strength and virtue in
weaknesses, along with the recognition that having overcome your
challenges, you are much more than the equation of that, you are "a
lesson in life!" Well-done.
Susan | |
| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling | 8/30/2008 |
| loved
this write...I feel a wonderful connection reading your poetry as it is
filled with heart and soul as well as much sincerity...well done!
Enjoyed!
Blessings, Joyce B. | |
| Reviewed by Jon Willey | 8/30/2008 |
| so many desirable facets to the lovely poetess of love and romance -- talk the talk and walk the walk -- JMW | |
| Reviewed by Richard Orey | 8/30/2008 |
| In the Holy Bible, God describes himself as "I am that I am."
And there's something godly in this and all your writings. My dear Victoria, I melt in your presence. Richard | |
| Reviewed by Linda Law | 8/29/2008 |
| Well my dear Victoria... I like you...and... I too am your den sister (or possibly mom/grandmom/old thing, etc...:-)) Our hearts do seem to connect no matter the generational changes.. I love your spirit and it comes across quite victoriously...as your name implies! lindalaw | |
| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis | 8/28/2008 |
| Truly lovely, Victoria - the 'story of you' is touching and inspirational. | |
| Reviewed by Samuel Stone | 8/27/2008 |
| A well written piece... and I agree you are...
Best Wishes... Sam | |
| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo | 8/27/2008 |
| You
are all the fine qualities that make you so very special and a unique
individual. Treasure all the qualities that led you to where you are
today and always be proud of your accomplishments. A very wonderfully
inspiring piece of truth....
Be always safe, Karen | |
| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle | 8/27/2008 |
| You
are the rose that blossoms in the garden of poetry with your words,your
honesty,your soul and your beauty that shines bright like the sun fill
with love and compassion for humanity and everything that is precious in
life.You are a jewel that has a 24 karrot gold of heart that is display
through your works.No matter what poem it is,I always love and enjoy
reading your poetry.Don't ever change your ways and most importantly
don't ever change who you are.The AuthorDen is honor to have someone
like you to showcase your talents and your individuality.Take care of
yourself
Edwin | |
| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen | 8/27/2008 |
| Bravo. | |
| Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour | 8/27/2008 |
| This
poem made me cry a bit :) What a powerful piece of honest humanity.
Your soul is so utterly honest in your poetry, which gives all your
writing a frankness that is sometimes lacking in some peoples poetics.
This was a very powerful write that went beyond dissecting it for me. I
couldn't dissect it and say it was effetive or not. It is simply a
lovely, honest and powerful poem. The pic is great :) It reflets the
honest side of you that is a wonderful compliment to your sultry side
and your sultry poetics
Peace and love you to :) Robert M | |
| Reviewed by Authoress & The Voices Of Muse Victoria L. McColley | 8/27/2008 |
| Groovy Babe!!
I Did That Wall In The Back Ground of My Photo With A Sea Sponge :) & well it did come out to be rather purple didn't it? lol I Love To Paint :) Much Love & Hugzzz To All Who Have Visited :) Thank You so Much For your Visit:) (and any new comers too) {{OXOXOX}} | |
| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G | 8/27/2008 |
| YOU sure are Sis! All this and so much more!
I love this poem1 She is also sweet, kind and I could go on! I'm glad you are my friend! You are straightforward and I want to do this challenge, I didn't know was a challenge, Hmmm... What am I missing! YOUAREBEAUTIFUL! INside and OUT! The back purple wall is AWESOME looking Vic! God BLESS YOU! WRITE-ON! Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful Sheexooo STay POSitive! YOU what else, with all you have gone through, I AM PROUD OF YOU! Many hugs and pats on your back, I am sending you through my loving energy Sis! | |
| Reviewed by Gene Williamson | 8/27/2008 |
| A lovely profile of the lovely young woman who puts romance
in our lives. Victoria, they grow 'em mighty nice in Indiana. -gene. | |
| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone | 8/27/2008 |
| This is Vickie, My spirit sister, What a beautiful response to Michelle's challenge..(I have yet to do one)
Much peace, love, and light, Amber "V" | |
| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat | 8/27/2008 |
| Victoria,
What a clever use of oxymorons! Beautifully written,..sister. Mary | |
| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce | 8/27/2008 |
| I'm so glad to know you, Victoria!!! You are a wonderful being!!!
Sandie Angel :o) | |
| Reviewed by Debra Baker | 8/27/2008 |
| Victoria you are truely a woman of compassion and strength with a heart of passion and a soul who embraces life. God has taught you to cherish and love every minute of life to it fullest...my Dear Friend... | |
| Reviewed by Paul Berube | 8/27/2008 |
| Sis,
You are a beautiful person inside and out. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. | |
| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson | 8/27/2008 |
| Vicky, I can't tell you how beautiful this one. One of the best I have read concerning this challenge so far! | |
| Reviewed by Felix Perry | 8/27/2008 |
| ...and
I am impressed, for you are all of these and so much more. Great job
Vick of presenting such a wonderful likeness and I love that
picture...so you.
hugs Fee | |
| Reviewed by Valerie Roeske | 8/27/2008 |
| Vicky, Great beauty here with the pen, you sound spitirually strong, and great to have you as a sister, Take care, Hugs Valerie | |
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