|Perfumeries Under Sand
This Photo Took Me Back
Within Emotional Time
Our daughters need to know their empowerment's...
We give them completions to face a world within wholeness of self
& a foundation of esteemed vaule
...their Vital Knowing of Worth
a commanding presence to own their life
Photo Title: Naked In the Rain
Perfumeries Under Sand
Her natural aura of delicate rainbows;
No matter all the storm’s pelting rain;
Glistens (canary sparkle) of vibrant yellows;
…as gold’s treasure unburied
inside her pain…
Her heart full of debilitating sorrow;
Naked with the truths of her broken life;
Contemplates all her failures now descrying;
…she counts the might of loss
from choices trite
…as balms will rise from lilies pond
a lotus beauty;
Captivation of spiritual roses she now blooms;
Offering petals of her perfumeries
under integral wetted sands;
Her path from soils buried
from burdens hue
(Written: January 18th, 2010 6:04 a/m)
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique
Copyright© 2010 Authoress|Poetess Victoria L. McColley
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|Reviewed by John Flanagan||1/18/2010|
For me, a poem of liberation, cleansing, catharsis, a metaphoric bathing - how well you've wrought this and how much you've brought to it and to us.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater||1/18/2010|
|Naked as we come from mother's womb...daughters enlightened.
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo||1/18/2010|
|"Her path from soils buried from burdens hue...she now completely understands...Thanks,Vickie!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry||1/18/2010|
|Vick this is stunning, you totally nailed that picture with your soft understanding words of life.