by Romantic Authoress & The Muses by: Victoria L. McColley
Sunday, July 20, 2008
cast your cares to the sea...
Emotions forever crossing,
the abyssal mists of infinity...
Embraced by ebbing shores,
Transparent cerulean hues,
from the savants of the sea...
Awaken nimbus infinite glory,
exulting halos of empyrean destiny...
(Written: July 20th, 2008 5:29 a/m)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour~poétesse romantique
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Photography Artist: http://foureyes.deviantart.com/
|Reviewed by Jon Willey||7/26/2008|
|" cerulean blue", one of my favorite hues when I am oil painting --"the savant of the sea", God? -- another stunning piece or poetry my dear -- walk slowly upon the shores of creativity as the sea of imagination laps gently the sands of pristine white -- JMW|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)||7/22/2008|
|Beautiful poetry Vickie and your pictures are always oh so heavenly, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Morning Star||7/22/2008|
|Strikingly beautiful the picture |
And your words and poem are perfect
Your words captured such beautiful vividness
Of the Beauty of nature!!
Peace Love and Light....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Poetess Of The Heart La Belle Rouge||7/21/2008|
|Beautifully penned, lovely images and metaphors Vicky.|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo||7/20/2008|
|Wonderful, serene photograph! After a hot, dismal day
your words are so calming to the soul.... |
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Michael Guy||7/20/2008|
|"Transparent cerulean hues, |
from the savant of the sea...
Awaken nimbus glory,
exulting the halos of destiny..." Any poet who can write those lines and uses the word "cerulean" is my kind of romance poet. I don't like romance poets who confine themselves to the personal, I want it to dig at the sky and stars... yours does, besides being a master of potent words. I used "cerulean" in the last paragraph of my novel: The Last Renaissance Man and it is loaded with images for me... I'd kill for the rights to that pic.... Your book if it includes photos will be expensive but great! Someday, someday...
|Reviewed by William Bonilla||7/20/2008|
beautiful soothing write |
I enjoyed much
peace & love be with you
|Reviewed by Felix Perry||7/20/2008|
came back from my granddaughters and drying on her door step was a star fish and
some sand dollars so opening this struck me as kind of cool. Vick your words and
especially this poem always seem to soothe and calm my heart with the beauty
described. Well done dear friend. |
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson||7/20/2008|
|Victoria, your soothing words succeeded in |
tossing my cares to the sea. I can dance again.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout||7/20/2008|
when I read your words I feel I am taken away to some beautiful, peaceful place,
within someones loving heart. What a wonderful feeling. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Richard Orey||7/20/2008|
Vickie, you are a source of lyrical beauty beyond compare. |
What I struggle to put into words seems to flow from your pen with the grace of romantic enchantment.
Your work is a sumptuous meal I cannot deny myself, again and again.
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh||7/20/2008|
|What beautiful words you use to describe this scene, the photo is divine.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos||7/20/2008|
|So...you it was your track was of the one kicking those
sands before me, although I came much later so I missed that sundown, but no the
words of this poem... |
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray||7/20/2008|
|This poem grabs me by the the soul. It's written by a real sweetie. I love you Vickie. xoxo|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU||7/20/2008|
Wise, magical sublime expressions of poetic enchantment in philosophical words.
Blest be Your Quill.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle||7/20/2008|
quote a McDonald's commercial,"I'm loving it" :-).I worship your
feelings,thoughts and your spirit that you have portrayed and expressed in your
poems.You are simply amazing.Take care of yourself
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone||7/20/2008|
tranquil beauty at it's best, Vickie, very very beautiful... |
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Valerie Roeske||7/20/2008|
beauty in the soul of you, wonderful write, enjoyed this read, thanks for
sharing, take care, Valerie|